2009年4月6日 星期一

20090401 太平山之旅

哇嗚嗚~~太平山好漂亮的地方

雖然天氣那樣冷酷卻蓋不住滿腔熱血

雖然QOO的無言卻也敵不過我的愉悅

雖然計畫趕不上變化但還是身體力行

雖然人事已非過往但美好景物依舊在

眼前的煙霧襯托著從口裡吐出的溫暖氣息,

那不可多得的鮮美空氣就這樣大口大口品嚐著,

閉上眼睛用心去感受那大自然的聲音,

敞開那雙手接受那無憂無慮的懷抱,

聆聽著來自於遠方對於自由的呼喚。

原來我那樣地幸福可以擁有這麼多美好的事物,

我還在奢求期望著什麼?內心不滿足的貪慾嗎?

還是渴望追於自己想要的幸福嗎?

我呼喊著,祈禱著內心裡的一個答案。

原來夢想一直在不遠處而我卻走著不同的路,繞著。

這樣繞來繞去好嗎!?

 

那太早得到那夢想之後要做什麼!? = ="

所以...

那就熱血吧!!

於是,

我收拾好心情、整理著情緒、拿著那一陀熱血,

期待的坐上朝著綠光開去的小火車,

努力的將一堆一堆悔恨推進火爐中,

再小心翼翼的把回憶一節節裝載著,

回想著是否不小心把快樂給遺留下,

終於,火車又開始朝著那不遠處的夢想出發去囉。

Driving my life with your secret gift you gave to me,I will bear as aesthetic as your precious soul.

And walk through the whole of the world carrying your wish like the Venus in the limit sky.

The inspiration comes from song "Aesthetic".

2009年4月3日 星期五

Technical Writing for Academic Publishing

Several days ago, I joined the lecture which was talk about English writing in thesis. the speaker that had a lot of experience with English training who is Steve.  Before I went there, I hope that could help me understand what the good writer does.

here, He mention about some points of technical writing such as passive sentence, noun-verb problem, overusing it/there, powerful verbs, redundancy problems in context etc..

but let me shocked that isn't all of them, it's another reason that your fledgling will rejected and cost 40% of successful probability which is relationship. what's relationship? you need money to bribe the judge who decides your fate? or you need friends which are judges.

He said, if you have a good sociality in the area of your major research, you will win the game. Why? how about the judge is your best friend and owe you money, how do you think about result of your request.

Yup, end of lecture giving specific & special thinking, your context doesn't directly focus on the techniques to crisis the anchors, sometime you will offend the judges, cause maybe the anchors which are the judges' teachers or friends, how do you think about the result?

Two sides of one coin, don't just look one side of coin. although you have good ideas if you want get name, reality is more important, DON'T BE FOOLISH.

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